
The hoses snake from kitchen windows as the kids
Squeal with stunned delight as freezing water hits
Their naked bodies running through the fingers of
Sunlight, strong and scorching on their skin.
The pungent smell of marijuana mixes with
The barbecues that hiss and fizzle
As the children dart between the grown up men,
Holding prongs and drinking beer, pretending
It is them who pulled together meals for all
While tired wives, hide in kitchens chopping up
The salad and the rolls and opening the bags of chips.
A dog will howl somewhere, desperate for the men
To put down beers and take up leads,
A walk down by the river, away from this,
This constant noise that echoes round our bubble,
Our grubby grey estate, where no one ever leaves,
We all just drink and smoke and fuck
Away our lives in heated balmy days…
Nick
This too is wonderfully written. Feel it all. Your writing grows and grows.
Margot Kinberg
You really do depict the setting and scenario so well! You placed me there, and I admire that. Thanks for a look at the council estate.
crispina kemp
Excellent, so full of life little sketches. And who knows, maybe one or two of those peeps will find a way of living a life that leads somewhere